Saturday, March 26, 2011
Driving Home
the rains have been abundant
and left the rolling hills
fat with grass
driving home
the wind blasted up the hillsides
and made the soft green
ripple like flowing water
all the creek flows have busted their banks
and spread out on the pastures
like lagoons
flocks of white cranes
meditate knee deep
motionless and buffeted
their feathers frumpy
in place of their usual grace
and elegance
one suddenly appears
just off the asphalt
up ahead on hiway 1
struggling in the wind
and almost hit by a truck
something drops from its beak
and a violent gust
sweeps the bird from sight
in a flash
a mouse lays stunned
in the middle of the road
another truck swerves to avoid
crushing it under wheels
as i pass
the mouse comes to
and dashes for the safety
of the grassy roadside
i love escapes
and this one made my day
Marc Ladewig
Author of Odysseus-The Epic Myth of the Hero

March 26, 2011 at 11:49 pm
thanks so much for reading my stuff.
March 27, 2011 at 8:12 am
What a story! It makes a strong impression in the mind, and leaves us to decide whether to take this as a symbol of something (like hope) or a pointer to the arbitrary influences in life. Fertile ground for thought!
March 27, 2011 at 8:48 pm
thanks for reading and commenting. your take reflects more than one facet.